Violin practice (music composition)

First Practice

This is my first practice, I play the A part first

for this practice. I still need to practice more because

there are some notes which are incorrect.

Second practice

In my second practice, I start to play the A and the

B part. The notes and the tempo is still kind of messy,

I need to practice more and I need to work on it.

Third Practice

In this third practice, I start to play all parts of my

composition. I still need to fin the right notes because

some of it I got it wrong and I need to practice it

more so that I can play it fluently without any mistakes.

Fourth Practice

This is my fourth practice and I think, I already

got some notes right and the melody is quite good.

But I think, I need to have more and more practice

so that I can play it beautifully. :D